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by Melody Pabz
I want you to hold me tight
Through a dark cold night
Quenching my thirst for light
Will I give up the fight?
Overwhelmed by deep sadness
Am I unworthy of happiness?
My life had been completely useless
Since the day you left me in the darkness
Persecuted by destiny
Cannot accept its cruelty
My worst fear became reality
When you left and abandoned me
You played with my feeling
Now, I’m finding my way through suffering
My heart is struggling
Because you’re the piece that is missing
Previous Comments
like this…
i can rel8 in this…
how can someone play in ur heart kht alm nila n seryoso k???
i think lging my kadikit n negative ang positive…
ryt??
akla mu ok n pro bigla nlng my mangyyari n di mu aklain…
hope it wud nvr happen again…
i like the meaning of this poem…
wla cia malalalim n words but it still delivers the emotion…
simple words with huge meaning….
still simplicity is an impact…
marami makkrel8 d2 kc maraming mahilig umasa wen it comes 2 luv…
ganda yan brad .. labas muh lang sama ng loob muh .. wlang pumipigil sau .. cge lng …
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uy, eto na ako… scan ko muna. hanap2 ako ng idea para gawing letra ng kanta.. heheh.. grabeh,,,lalim ng vocabulary mo ha.. kakanosebleed.. Well done! truly an art of expressing yourself..
Posted by jhe-el at April 5, 2010, 10:55 pm